In "The Marriage Game", Alison Weir writes skillfully to turn something small into something that will surely stick out to her readers. This is displayed in a scene where Elizabeth reads the letter Robert sent her stating that he married Lettice and they are having a child.Weir makes sure that the importance of this moment is illuminated. In this section of the story, she uses imagery, word choice, rhetorical questions, and stylistic choices to make the readers feel Elizabeth's pain. Imagery is created when she states "...which made her cry out in agony. Weeping torrents, she sank to the floor, beating her breast" (Weir, 304). Not only can we picture Elizabeth on the floor sobbing, but we can hear it. Weir also uses particular diction to emphasize Elizabeth's feeling of betrayal. She refers to Robert's actions as "treachery"(303) as she cries out in "agony"(304). Weir uses her own linguistic style to portray Elizabeth's thoughts on what Robert has done as extreme and completely unforgivable. "He should not have it this time. He would never have it again"(303), "she would go right now and do that, and let him know how deeply he had hurt and displeased her, and that nothing would ever be the same again, ever" (304). She asks rhetorically, "Did he not know how much she had loved him, and still did love him, God help her"(304)? Weir creates a dramatic, human-like, relatable version of Elizabeth's heartbreak using all these components. Pointing out how hurt Elizabeth was shows that she did not see this as some "Marriage Game", she really did love and care for Robert. Someone that only keeps these men close to the kingdom for fun, sure was heartbroken when she found out she was left for someone else.
Showing posts with label Queen Elizabeth. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Queen Elizabeth. Show all posts
Sunday, April 29, 2018
Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Peering Through
(When Lettice meets with Robert to tell him she is having his child and they should get married)
"That's true, said Robert. I will arrange it...There will be no more delay". (Holt 222)
Listening through the crack of the door Lettice and Robert were in, Elizabeth heard every word. She gasped when she heard that Lettice was with Robert's child. She had realized she had lost her one true love. She broke down in tears. All this time she had wasted on Robert, never truly going after what she wanted. She was not surprised that Lettice and he had been lovers because she always noticed the way those two looked at each other. It was the same way she would look at Robert. She thought for a second if there was a way for her to stop everything and turn back the clock. She could banish Lettice and their unborn child, and finally give into Robert. She could confess her love to Robert and put herself first for once. But she wouldn't, and she didn't. As much as she wanted too, she knew she was better off without him and would not let herself be with him. She had decided to pretend as if she never heard their conversation and let the two lovers be. Although the sight of Lettice made her nauseous and hateful, she had bigger things to worry about. And so she walked away from her regret hoping that one day if it was meant to be, Robert would find his way back to her. Until then, she spent her days in love with England.
If Only You Would Have Told Me...
Major Challenge- FanFiction
I really liked reading "My Enemy the Queen" by Victoria Holt, so much so that I could not stop reading once I started. Regardless, I felt like a lot of the conflict in this book could have been avoided if Lettice and Robert Dudley had told Queen Elizabeth the truth about their love affair. This is how "My Enemy the Queen" should have ended...
I wanted to see Robert to tell him that I was with child, for I was certain of it. I was thrilled to be a mother again, and bare the child of the handsome Robert Dudley, Earl of Leicester. But I was too anxious to be happy now. I wondered what Robert would do when I told him the news. Would he be thrilled, as I? Or would he disown the child? Then, the most dreaded anxiety of all: telling Queen Elizabeth, my cousin, that I was going to bare the child of the man she loved. Although my love for Robert was as deep as the ocean, and I knew he felt the same way about me, I feared the queen's wrath worse than death.
When Robert finally arrived at Durham House and I told him the news of our child, his smile lit up the room. We embraced, and in that moment I knew that everything would turn out okay if Robert would take me as his wife now, before my pregnancy began to show. I told him this, and he readily agreed.
"I will arrange it. Come to Kenilworth and the ceremony shall take place there. There will be no more delay." I knew he meant what he said this time. There was no doubt in my mind now that he would take care of my children and I. That was the biggest blessing of all: knowing my children would not live without a father.
Before I could make the journey to Kenilworth to get married, there was something I had to do. I knew Robert would argue with me and possibly break off our engagement if I told him my plans, so instead of rushing to Kenilworth, I went to the queen's bedchamber.
"Your Majesty," I began, feeling butterflies dance a waltz inside of my stomach. "There is a pressing matter in which I need to discuss with you."
"Yes Lettice? What can I do for you?" she asked, sounding bored. I took a deep breath, and said:
"Your Majesty, I have a confession to make. I am with child, your grace. The father of the child is Sir. Robert Dudley. Before you speak, please let me explain." Her eyes widened and her face began to turn red, but she held her tongue until I was finished telling her Robert and I's love story. "Your Majesty, I could not help falling in love with Robert anymore than you can help breathing. If you call him here, he will not deny his love for me either. Please let us be married in peace. If you wish, I will step away from court forever and you will never see my face again. Just please, your Majesty...please let us be married. I can not have my child be a bastard or I a common whore." Elizabeth was quiet for several minutes, but her stony glare told me she was thinking my request over grudgingly.
"I should have you banned from court forever," she began, and my heart dropped. "I should wish that your child will be stillborn or a hunchback. I should whip Robert 'til the point of death for betraying me. I should have you jailed for life for betraying me. But," she paused, with a frown. "I will not. I can not let my people see me in such a way. You are, however, banned from this court forever and I will speak to Robert on this matter. If he doesn't deny you or your child, you can do whatever you want with each other. Frankly I don't care so long as your traitors are removed from my presence. I never what to see your faces again. Do you understand?"
"Yes your Majesty," I replied, dumbstruck.
"Now go. Take my words as a blessing from a death sentance." I turned and hurried out of the bedchamber. Down the hall I heard her add loudly: "And don't you ever come back!"
It didn't matter to me whether or not I came into this place again: I had everything I could ever want and more. I was finally going to have the happiness I deserved. I walked out of the castle a happy woman, and I never looked back.
Meanwhile, in the queen's bedchamber, Elizabeth began to cry.
I really liked reading "My Enemy the Queen" by Victoria Holt, so much so that I could not stop reading once I started. Regardless, I felt like a lot of the conflict in this book could have been avoided if Lettice and Robert Dudley had told Queen Elizabeth the truth about their love affair. This is how "My Enemy the Queen" should have ended...
I wanted to see Robert to tell him that I was with child, for I was certain of it. I was thrilled to be a mother again, and bare the child of the handsome Robert Dudley, Earl of Leicester. But I was too anxious to be happy now. I wondered what Robert would do when I told him the news. Would he be thrilled, as I? Or would he disown the child? Then, the most dreaded anxiety of all: telling Queen Elizabeth, my cousin, that I was going to bare the child of the man she loved. Although my love for Robert was as deep as the ocean, and I knew he felt the same way about me, I feared the queen's wrath worse than death.
When Robert finally arrived at Durham House and I told him the news of our child, his smile lit up the room. We embraced, and in that moment I knew that everything would turn out okay if Robert would take me as his wife now, before my pregnancy began to show. I told him this, and he readily agreed.
"I will arrange it. Come to Kenilworth and the ceremony shall take place there. There will be no more delay." I knew he meant what he said this time. There was no doubt in my mind now that he would take care of my children and I. That was the biggest blessing of all: knowing my children would not live without a father.
Before I could make the journey to Kenilworth to get married, there was something I had to do. I knew Robert would argue with me and possibly break off our engagement if I told him my plans, so instead of rushing to Kenilworth, I went to the queen's bedchamber.
"Your Majesty," I began, feeling butterflies dance a waltz inside of my stomach. "There is a pressing matter in which I need to discuss with you."
"Yes Lettice? What can I do for you?" she asked, sounding bored. I took a deep breath, and said:
"Your Majesty, I have a confession to make. I am with child, your grace. The father of the child is Sir. Robert Dudley. Before you speak, please let me explain." Her eyes widened and her face began to turn red, but she held her tongue until I was finished telling her Robert and I's love story. "Your Majesty, I could not help falling in love with Robert anymore than you can help breathing. If you call him here, he will not deny his love for me either. Please let us be married in peace. If you wish, I will step away from court forever and you will never see my face again. Just please, your Majesty...please let us be married. I can not have my child be a bastard or I a common whore." Elizabeth was quiet for several minutes, but her stony glare told me she was thinking my request over grudgingly.
"I should have you banned from court forever," she began, and my heart dropped. "I should wish that your child will be stillborn or a hunchback. I should whip Robert 'til the point of death for betraying me. I should have you jailed for life for betraying me. But," she paused, with a frown. "I will not. I can not let my people see me in such a way. You are, however, banned from this court forever and I will speak to Robert on this matter. If he doesn't deny you or your child, you can do whatever you want with each other. Frankly I don't care so long as your traitors are removed from my presence. I never what to see your faces again. Do you understand?"
"Yes your Majesty," I replied, dumbstruck.
"Now go. Take my words as a blessing from a death sentance." I turned and hurried out of the bedchamber. Down the hall I heard her add loudly: "And don't you ever come back!"
It didn't matter to me whether or not I came into this place again: I had everything I could ever want and more. I was finally going to have the happiness I deserved. I walked out of the castle a happy woman, and I never looked back.
Meanwhile, in the queen's bedchamber, Elizabeth began to cry.
A Lover Scorned
Queen Elizabeth, in My Enemy the Queen, is yet again twisted into a caricature of herself. In this novel, she's a name-calling, desperate, and lonely scorned lover who depends entirely on Robert. Holt even wrote: "The Queen was never happy when Robert wasn't with her."
So, what is the reason these novelists have used Elizabeth as a focal point? How do they change her personality for the novel? What kind of pattern do we see in these changes? Particularly, why is it that Elizabeth is used mainly for romance novels? (This brings us back to history's strange obsession with her 'sex life'.)
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So, what is the reason these novelists have used Elizabeth as a focal point? How do they change her personality for the novel? What kind of pattern do we see in these changes? Particularly, why is it that Elizabeth is used mainly for romance novels? (This brings us back to history's strange obsession with her 'sex life'.)
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Wednesday, April 18, 2018
Exposure
I chose this gif of roses dying because I believe it represents Elizabeth's life as a whole. She starts off as a beautiful teen who can be described as pure and youthful. Due to exposure to the position of power she is placed in and all the duties that came along with it, she slowly "wilts" and becomes aged and worn out until it eventually kills her.
Tuesday, April 17, 2018
‘Queen’ Elizabeth? Hardly
“Robert, I don’t know how to do this.” she said, in a small voice. “I can’t even remember how to get to the King’s rooms from the great hall. If someone doesn’t walk before me I’ll get lost. I don’t know how to get to the gardens from the picture gallery, or from the stable to my rooms. I... I’m lost here.” (Gregory, Pg. 35)
This quote was the moment I realized there was something very wrong with this novels depiction of Elizabeth. The way she delivers this line- ‘in a small voice’- paints her as helpless and frightened, which is the complete opposite of Queen Elizabeth. We see her here, nervous and quivering and relying on a man to guide her. Granted, it’s in a fairly mundane situation, and it’s entirely possible that the real Elizabeth could plausibly have gotten lost; but I refuse to believe she would openly act so helpless. This is where I realized Elizabeth in this book was going to be nothing but a typical helpless damsel, and it only gets worse from here...
This quote was the moment I realized there was something very wrong with this novels depiction of Elizabeth. The way she delivers this line- ‘in a small voice’- paints her as helpless and frightened, which is the complete opposite of Queen Elizabeth. We see her here, nervous and quivering and relying on a man to guide her. Granted, it’s in a fairly mundane situation, and it’s entirely possible that the real Elizabeth could plausibly have gotten lost; but I refuse to believe she would openly act so helpless. This is where I realized Elizabeth in this book was going to be nothing but a typical helpless damsel, and it only gets worse from here...
Monday, April 16, 2018
Elizabeth, Nice For What?
While reading Queen Elizabeth's letter to the King of Scotland I could not help, but be reminded of this song. When she said she had his best holds in her hands, and conserved them and rendered them to him she had to be nice, for what?
Tuesday, April 10, 2018
In Her Own Words...
I found several fascinating trends/patterns in Elizabeth's speeches: 1.) She always brings up princes, particularly when referring to herself, 2.) has a teasing tone (seemingly reminiscent of Cate Blanchett's Elizabeth in the film Elizabeth), and 3.) she constantly refers to giving her all to her throne and England, thanking her people for their understanding and effort when she sees fit. These two quotes stuck out to me as great summaries both for her attitude in these speeches and her persona as represented by the other texts we've read/watched:
"How have I governed since my reign? I will be tried by envy itself. I need not to use many words, for my deeds do try me" (Greenblatt, 692).
"I know I have the body but of a weak and feeble woman; but I have the heart and stomach of a king, and of a king of England too" (Greenblatt, 700).
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"How have I governed since my reign? I will be tried by envy itself. I need not to use many words, for my deeds do try me" (Greenblatt, 692).
"I know I have the body but of a weak and feeble woman; but I have the heart and stomach of a king, and of a king of England too" (Greenblatt, 700).
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Monday, April 9, 2018
God Forbid Women are Single *eye roll*
Although the full reasoning behind Elizabeth not wanting to marry is never know in full detail, we know it worked for her. Why though, would she not marry, never have children, never have a "love"? She probably never knew a "family life" (although being queen she most likely wouldn't have had much time). Did she do this only for the good of her kingdom, so she could be the best leader they needed? Or did she have other private intentions that haven't been reveled? Was she afraid of her husband overtaking her power? There's many reasons, some we know for sure, but maybe there are others that have never been revealed.
Wednesday, April 4, 2018
Bloody Elizabeth?
Class Question:
Queen Elizabeth's predecessor, Mary I of England, is referred to by historians as 'Bloody Mary' because of persecution of Protestants in England.
Upon succeeding Bloody Mary, Elizabeth I established Protestantism as the official religion of Great Britain. She began her long persecution of the nation's Catholic's immediately after.
Question: Why is Mary I notorious for her persecution of Protestants, and referred to as Bloody Mary? Yet, Elizabeth I is referred to as Good Queen Bess, despite her long persecution of Catholics? Is this another instance of Tonypandy?
https://muse.jhu.edu/article/50912
Queen Elizabeth's predecessor, Mary I of England, is referred to by historians as 'Bloody Mary' because of persecution of Protestants in England.
Upon succeeding Bloody Mary, Elizabeth I established Protestantism as the official religion of Great Britain. She began her long persecution of the nation's Catholic's immediately after.
Question: Why is Mary I notorious for her persecution of Protestants, and referred to as Bloody Mary? Yet, Elizabeth I is referred to as Good Queen Bess, despite her long persecution of Catholics? Is this another instance of Tonypandy?
https://muse.jhu.edu/article/50912

Can They Be Similar?
Major Challenge: Reflective Paragraph
Although I was not happy with either of the two president candidates for our most recent election, and I despise politics, after reading about Queen Elizabeth I almost immediately thought of Hillary Clinton. If Hillary Clinton had become president, I feel as if she and Queen Elizabeth could learn something from each other. It appears that Mrs. Clinton is as independent as Queen Elizabeth, which I admire about Queen Elizabeth, especially in a time where not many people wanted only a Queen to rule. Mrs. Clinton would have faced the same criticism and struggles as Queen Elizabeth if she had become the first woman President of the United States. Mrs. Clinton would have had to defend her femininity and show masculinity at the same time in order to run the U.S., similar to how Queen Elizabeth used her femininity and masculinity to win wars and make decisions for England. Many people are scared of change, especially after our country had already faced a change in pattern when former President Obama was elected into office; therefore, allowing a woman to take charge of the United States could have possibly upset a large number of people. Despite the challenges the people of the U.S. would have posed to Mrs. Clinton, if she had won the election she would have to earn the trust of not only the people, but her staff as well, much like Queen Elizabeth did so long ago. Perhaps the staff at the white house would appreciate Mrs. Clinton the same as the staff in England appreciated Queen Elizabeth, maybe not.
I chose the two pictures below to show that despite the different time frames these two women are in, they have faced similar challenges.
Pictures from Google
Although I was not happy with either of the two president candidates for our most recent election, and I despise politics, after reading about Queen Elizabeth I almost immediately thought of Hillary Clinton. If Hillary Clinton had become president, I feel as if she and Queen Elizabeth could learn something from each other. It appears that Mrs. Clinton is as independent as Queen Elizabeth, which I admire about Queen Elizabeth, especially in a time where not many people wanted only a Queen to rule. Mrs. Clinton would have faced the same criticism and struggles as Queen Elizabeth if she had become the first woman President of the United States. Mrs. Clinton would have had to defend her femininity and show masculinity at the same time in order to run the U.S., similar to how Queen Elizabeth used her femininity and masculinity to win wars and make decisions for England. Many people are scared of change, especially after our country had already faced a change in pattern when former President Obama was elected into office; therefore, allowing a woman to take charge of the United States could have possibly upset a large number of people. Despite the challenges the people of the U.S. would have posed to Mrs. Clinton, if she had won the election she would have to earn the trust of not only the people, but her staff as well, much like Queen Elizabeth did so long ago. Perhaps the staff at the white house would appreciate Mrs. Clinton the same as the staff in England appreciated Queen Elizabeth, maybe not.
I chose the two pictures below to show that despite the different time frames these two women are in, they have faced similar challenges.
Pictures from Google
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